beatdown deck

[the pharoah]

this is my turnament deck please help!

4-tribute monsters

1-horus the black flame dragon lv6
1-cyber dragon
1-mobius the frost monarch
1-zaborg the thunder monarch

15-non-tribute monsters

1-berserk gorilla
1-d.d. warrior lady
1-breaker the magical warrior
1-treeborn frog
1-injection fairy lily
1-sangan
1-tsukuyomi
2-blade knight
2-magician of faith
2-ninja grandmaster sasuke
2-exarion universe

14-spell cards

1-scapegoat
1-snatch steal
1-mystical space typhoon
1-brain control
1-premature burial
1-swords of revealing light
1-heavy storm
1-lightning vortex
1-graceful charity
1-pot of avarice
2-smashing ground
2-nobleman of crossout

7-trap cards

1-torrential tribute
1-mirror force
1-call of the haunted
2-sakuretsu armor
2-bottomless trap hole

 

[the pharoah]

i have made a small change to my deck so can anybody give any suggestions to improve it?

 

[Inuyasha_Riku]

add a chaos sorcerer i guess? u've got more than enough darks and lights to use it...

 

[Barty64]

what about 1 nobleman of crossout out for a card destruction or magical mallet(if you have it)

 

[|Timaeus|]

Ok this deck needs alot of remakes.

-1 Cyber Dragon
+1 Mobius the Frost Monarch

-1 Horus the Black Flame Dragon
+1 Zaborg the Thunder Monarch

I assume you made a bit of Beast-Beatdown so:

-1 Tsukuyomi
+1 Berserk Gorilla

-2 Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke
+2 Informidable Fighter Lei-Lei

-2 Blade Knight
+2 Goblin ( Elite ) Attack Force

Spells should look like this:

Premature Burial
Snatch Steal
Mystical Space Typhoon
Book of Moon
Scapegoat
Enemy Controller
Enemy Controller
Heavy Storm
Graceful Charity
Smashing Ground
Smashing Ground
Last Will
Nobleman of Crossout
Nobleman of Crossout

Rate/Fix ParadoX

 

[|Timaeus|]

Ok this deck needs alot of remakes.

-1 Cyber Dragon
+1 Mobius the Frost Monarch

-1 Horus the Black Flame Dragon
+1 Zaborg the Thunder Monarch

I assume you made a bit of Beast-Beatdown so:

-1 Tsukuyomi
+1 Berserk Gorilla

-2 Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke
+2 Informidable Fighter Lei-Lei

-2 Blade Knight
+2 Goblin ( Elite ) Attack Force

Spells should look like this:

Premature Burial
Snatch Steal
Mystical Space Typhoon
Book of Moon
Scapegoat
Enemy Controller
Enemy Controller
Heavy Storm
Graceful Charity
Smashing Ground
Smashing Ground
Last Will
Nobleman of Crossout
Nobleman of Crossout

Rate/Fix ParadoX