FFF -Frog are For Fun, r/f plz

[D.D. Magician]

Ciao! This deck is about the small and slimey things that lives in swamps. Frogs.

Deck name: The Lords of the Swamps
Deck total: 40 cards


Trib. monster: 5

2x Mobius the Frost Monarch
3x Des Frog

Non trib. monster: 14

3x T.A.D.P.O.L.E.
2x Treeborn Frog
2x Mother Grizzly
2x Spirit Reaper
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
1x D.D. Warrior Lady
1x Sangan
1x Exiled Force
1x Magician of Faith

Spell: 13

2x Des Croaking
3x Smashing Ground
1x Brain Control
1x Book of Moon
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Heavy Storm
1x Premature Burial
1x Dark Hole
1x Snatch Steal

Trap: 8

3x Sakuretsu Armor
2x Dust Tornado
1x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Call of the Haunted
1x Torrential Tribute

How about this???