Is this any good?

[EmeraldDragon]

Ive been away for a while and dont know if this has been done before. Its basicly a mess with the cookie cutters I remember. Just trying to make bountiful artemis useful to me. Tell me if youve seen this before anywhere.

total = 40

Monsters x 17

Cyber dragon x 1
majestic mech ohka x 2
bountiful artemis x 3
skelengel x 2
greenkappa x 1
sangan x 1
exiled force x 1
spirit reaper x 1
dekoichi the battlechanted locomotive x 1
magician of faith x 1
breaker the magical warrior x 1
mobius the frost monarch x 1
mystic tomatoe x 1

Traps x 16

magic jammer x 2
magic cylinder x 1
magic drain x 2
trap jammer x 3
spell shield type-8 x 2
sakuretsu armour x 3
cursed seal of the forbidden spell x 2
call of the haunted x 1

spells x 7

hammer shot x 1
swords of revealing light x 1
fissure x 2
premature burial x 1
mystical space typhoon x 1
heavy storm x 1

 

[skey23]

You might want to update it for the September Ban list...lol.

"Chaos Sorcerer" es no bueno anymore.
Neither is "Snatch Steal".

 

[EmeraldDragon]

Damn. I didnt even know it had changed.

I must do research!!!!

Done and done. Takes away the punch power of the deck but hopefully its still workable.

 

[Lancedolittle]

I see STD's everywhere are you sure you got it covered (spell/trap destruction) wow, 2 spell shields,2 magic jamms,2 magic drains,mobius and Breaker. Show nough not getting beat by a spell huh lol. well decree corks all but the mobius and breaker.

But you catch someone with a hand full of magic and they got problems. hmmm I have been out of the new stuff myself. I'm not sure what the artemis and majestic mech do so I will have to study up I guess. But at first glance I think you are a bit top heavy on the STD's

I'll have to think on replacements but Enemy Controller is one of my favorite cards and very useful. but With the hammershot I might include a Zero gravity in exchange for one of those spell killers. just incase your shot turns on you

 

[theallmightypoe]

if you are going to run so many traps, at least find room for 2-3 dust tornado, to use o the royal decrees of death.

To protect your monsters, try main decking Rush Recklessly

 

[bao magician]

You might want to update it for the September Ban list...lol.

"Chaos Sorcerer" es no bueno anymore.
Neither is "Snatch Steal".

You mean no es bueno anymore
and how about another exiled force?

 

[Jathro]

I see STD's everywhere are you sure you got it covered...

I soooo took that the wrong way at first glance (*pauses while it sinks in... got it? k )

The Mystic Tomato seems oddly out of place here. It can only pull a Sangan and Spirt Reaper. I'd say drop it in place of a 2nd Exiled Force and find room for Last Will - maybe for one of the Sakuretsus. And let's face it, Mobius is far superior to Greenkappa. Keep in mind, Greenkappa will destroy 2 (even if it's your own) or 0, while Mobius has the option to destroy 2, 1, or 0.

 

[EmeraldDragon]

Well i am gonna alter it slightly now that ive actually heard about the new ban list. Damn not looking at yugioh stuff for a couple months. Im gonna add in another dark monster or two. Maybe a second exiled if i feel the need and of course a second mobius but i need a little time to root through my cards to get things sorted first.