ritual deck, can you guys improve it

[Terry the Elder]

Deck Name: Terry' ritual
Author:
Count: 44

Monsters: 20
Tribute:

Non-Tribute:
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Jerry Beans Man
Magician of Faith
Manju of the Ten Thousand Hands
Manju of the Ten Thousand Hands
Manju of the Ten Thousand Hands
Newdoria
Paladin of White Dragon
Paladin of White Dragon
Paladin of White Dragon
Relinquished
Relinquished
Relinquished
Sangan
Senju of the Thousand Hands
Senju of the Thousand Hands
Senju of the Thousand Hands
Sonic Bird
Sonic Bird
Sonic Bird

Spells:17
Bait Doll
Black Illusion Ritual
Black Illusion Ritual
Black Illusion Ritual
Contract with the Abyss
Emergency Provisions
Emergency Provisions
Heavy Storm
Metamorphosis
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial
Snatch Steal
Swords of Revealing Light
White Dragon Ritual
White Dragon Ritual
White Dragon Ritual

Traps:8
Call of the Haunted
Curse of Royal
Dust Tornado
Magic Drain
Magic Drain
Magic Drain
Seven Tools of the Bandit
Trap Jammer

Side Deck:15
Axe of Despair
Bait Doll
Barrel Behind the Door
Barrel Behind the Door
Barrel Behind the Door
De-Spell
De-Spell
Des Wombat
Des Wombat
Ekibyo Drakmord
Malice Dispersion
Opti-Camouflage Armor
Remove Trap
Smashing Ground
Trap of Board Eraser

Fusions

Thousand-Eyes Restrict

 

[Inuyasha_Riku]

perhaps a Scapegoat?

 

[Jason_C]

Other than looking friggin' awesome, does Jerry Beans Man serve any real function?

I don't see Contract with the Abyss as being useful in any way, as you have only one form of Dark Ritual Monster. Probably drop that.

Now, I honestly think 3x Sonic Bird, 3x Manju, and 3x Senju is really overdoing it. It would be borderline impossible to make a deck flow smoothly with that much extra weight.

- Jerry Beans Man
- Contract with the Abyss
- 3 Sonic Bird
- Seven Tools of the Bandit
- Trap Jammer
- Magic Drain (3 is really pushing it)

+ Luminous Spark
+ Blue-Eyes White Dragon
+ Something decently strong and 4 stars, like a Thunder Nyan-Nyan or something.

 

[Absird]

Maybe run a dark Ritual i.e. The Masked Beast, Dark Master - Zorc when that way you don't have to worry about drawing the right ritual spell card

 

[diverson667]

I'm fairly new to the game, and yet I find this to be a very creative theme deck.Thanks for sharing.

 

[Terry the Elder]

The Scapegoat and The Masked Beast sound good. I may drop the Jerry beans for a Mad Dog of Darkness.

This is really my fun deck although I am considering taking it to a tourney.

Thanks for the advice.

 

[Master G]

Personally, I will prefer to have two ritual monsters and spells each. Three is too much. Also, U don't really need Sonic Bird and senju

- 1 Relinquished
- 1 Paladin of White Dragon
- 1 Black Illusion Ritual
- 1 White Dragon Ritual
- 3 Sonic Bird
- 3 Senju of the Thousand Hands

+ 1 Dark Master - Zorc (If you have)
+ 1 D.D. Assailant (if u have)
+ 1 D.D. Warrior Lady
+ 1 or 2 Luster Dragon/Archfiend Soldier/Mad Dog of Darkness (Any 1900 monsters)
+ 1 or 2 Spirit Reaper
+ 1 or 2 Smashing Ground

 

[krazykidpsx]

the sonics and the senju will not do you much, basically what you want is Manju Recursion were you keep thining with manju

 

[dannyboi]

deck help

y dont u try Samsara