Silent Swordsman w/ Spear Cretin Deck

[Vampiric Omega]

Monsters (20)
Treeborn Frog
Outstanding Dog Marron
D-Hero Disk Commander
Marshmallon
Man Eater Bug
Spear Cretin x 3
Morphing Jar
Mystic Swordsman LV2
Silent Swordsman LV3 x 3
Snipe Hunter
Pitch Black Warwolf x 3
Silent Swordsman LV5 x 2
Silent Swordsman LV7

Spells (12)
Book of Moon
Card Destruction
Creature Swap x 2
Foolish Burial
Heavy Storm
Lightning Vortex
Mystical Space Typhoon
Nobleman of Crossout x 2
Smashing Ground
Swords of Revealing Light

Traps (8)
Bottomless Trap Hole x 3
Forced Back
Malevolent Catastrophe
Mirror Force
Sakurestu Armor x 2



Alright so there it is. I'm not sure what i'm looking for in posting my deck here, all i know is I am not really enjoying my deck too much. Any suggestions would be appreciated, just post what you would change if it were your deck. All posts will be appreciated and taken into consideration. thx.

 

[Vampiric Omega]

...I wish someone might post here...

 

[Occasus_Tenshi]

Hm, lots of potential waiting to come out in this deck... spear cretin combos well with NoC mystic swordsman for his effect. Silent is for spell control, tho there are more ways to improve IMO. You should go for more mystic swordsmen along with the silents, and also add Royal Decree for complete control over your monster. A bit more warrior support would be good as well. This is what I would suggest;

-man eater bug
+Night Assailant (you've got some flippers worth getting back)
- Outstanding Dog Marron
- Pitch Black Warwolf x 3
- Silent Swordsman lv3 (2 is just fine, I play a Silent control warrior so I would know )
- Morphing Jar
+one more Mystic Swordsman LV2
+ Mystic Swordsman LV4 x2
+ Mystic Swordsman LV6
+ Marauding Captain x2 (speed and for special summoning MSlv4)
+ Command Knight x2 (when you have both SSlv7 and Royal Decree out you need to power your Swordsman)

+another book of moon
+monster reborn (well it's in... why not use it)
+level up x2 (this is a must for some lvl support, tho level modulation is not needed so I didn't suggest it)
+Royal Decree x2 (for Silent control)
- Bottomless Trap Hole x 3 (you don't want to come across !> 1500 monsters or Return decks)
-Forced Back
-Malevolent Catastrophe

By my suggestion your deck would look something like this;

Monsters (22)
Treeborn Frog
D-Hero Disk Commander
Marshmallon
Night Assailant
Spear Cretin x 3
Mystic Swordsman LV2 x2
Silent Swordsman LV3 x 2
Snipe Hunter
Mystic Swordsman LV4 x2
Silent Swordsman LV5 x 2
Mystic Swordsman LV6
Silent Swordsman LV7
Marauding Captain x2
Command Knight x2

Spells (16)
Book of Moon x2
Card Destruction
Creature Swap x 2
Foolish Burial
Heavy Storm
Lightning Vortex
Mystical Space Typhoon
Nobleman of Crossout x 2
Smashing Ground
Swords of Revealing Light
Monster Reborn
Level Up! x2

Traps (5)
Royal Decree x2
Mirror Force
Sakurestu Armor x 2

That leaves you with 43 cards, so if you think you can do without 3 more go for it. Personally I'd take out Snipe Hunter, Treeborn and card destruction if I wanted to make the deck 40, but if you can live with 43 then no worries

Hope this helps

--~ A.