black cannon by komdokid

[komdokid]

well this is an otk deck that i came appon wile trying 2 make another so u can say i was inspired.
the deck uses a 4 card combo and it is a infinity otk deck and if every thing is legal it is very promiseing.
cannon s ,black p, spring of rebirht and ultiment offering.
with these 4 cards i can make a infint burn gain game ending combo.
please read the hole thing and fix and comment.
so with that i give u black cannon.
mon 14
a cat of ill omen x3
black ptera x3
cannon soilder x3
flying kamakiri
mystic tomato
samgan
magical merchent
spirit reaper
spell
spring of rebirth x3
timidity x3
upstart goblen x3
book of taiyou x2
messenger x2
magical mallet x2
giant t
swords
a father of the p
trap
compulsory x3
therating roar x3
torrental
ultimat offering

know if u dont get it active U O summen cannon s and active spring of rebirth pay 500 summen black ptera. offer it to deal 500, now u gain 500 from the spring now pay 500 2 do the samething and the funney thing is u can do this if u have 600lp and upset your opp.
so if i can do this this is the deck i eill take to the per show and test it out. and maby 2 reg. so please look it over and post commints and fixes

 

[densetsu_x]

Spring of Rebirth only gives you life points when a card is returned from the field to your hand. Your proposed use in the combo will not work since when Cannon Soldier launches Black Ptera, it is sent to the Graveyard first and then Black Ptera's effect activates to return itself from the Graveyard to your hand. As you can see, that middle step basically means the only card Spring of Rebirth will work with is Compulsory Evacuation Device.

 

[komdokid]

:nyah u r so right. M F ER i got so happey abou it that i so what i wonted to see. thanks for that. i gess i have 2 chang it back into the beck it was suppose to be. again thanks.