First of all I reviewed it before you edited it which i'm guessing you did almost right after you posted this (yeah but i can see it says ^[quote ]Last edited by EmeraldFan; Today at 01:26 PM. [/quote]) so see, what i'm saying here is that i don't need to play against this deck to know it won't work AT LEAST 7/10times(it's just a saying meaning most of the times) because you're using more traps than spells and 1 less than monsters, meaning no matter what a lot of times you're going to get dead hands, no searchers no thinners only stallers, even if you have 3 copies of Final countdown that doesn't guarantee you're going to draw 1 of those any time soon, and even if you do it's not sure you're going to win because, yes, you have stallers, but not enough of them, usually Final countdown works better in a deck especially dedicated to that card, stalling with those cards WILL buy you some time but doesn't assure you nothing, once again as i already said in my previous comment a royal decree will make almost half of your deck useless same as jinzo. I'm guessing you have more traps than spells for 1 card "cursed seal of the forbidden spell" and if that's not the reason then i don't know why you do, since traps need more time to be activated and you don't have table turning trap cards, instead you have enchanted javelin (the downgraded version of Draining shield). My point is there are better and more useful spell cards that will give you some more stall as vengeful bog spirit since you don't attack that spell card will give you some more time to spare until you get a final countdown. Messenger of piece, you only pay 100 lp per turn to avoid getting attacked. But stalling alone wont give you a definite victory you need some thinners or searchers. Now don't take people's constructive criticizing as an offense, i mean I guess you posted this deck for a reason...getting it fixed. Now if you don't like any of the fixes then just leave it like it is, whatever floats your boat...and i'm not saying your deck sucks or anything similar i'm just saying it needs fixes to work at it's best...so GOOD DAY!