(NEW) Exodia need help(suggestions)

[ygocollectorx]

hey guys this a new exodia deck im working on..
ive seen some exodia decks so i decided to give it a try here it is
any sugggestions are welcomed..

total:40

monsters:16
1 Left Leg of the Forbidden One
1 Right Leg of the Forbidden One
1 Left Arm of the Forbidden One
1 Right Arm of the Forbidden One
1 Exodia the Forbidden One
1 Sangan
1 Swarm of Scarabs
1 Tsukuyomi
3 Mystic Tomato
3 Emissary of the Afterlife
2 Magician of Faith

spells:12
2 Upstart Goblin
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Level Limit - Area B
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Heavy Storm
1 Pot of Avarice
1 Stumbling
1 Reload
1 Premature Burial
1 Graceful Charity
1 Dark Factory of Mass Production

traps:12
3 Jar of Greed
3 Waboku
2 Raigeki Break
1 Negate Attack
1 back up soldier
1 Gravity Bind
1 Call of the Haunted

 

[Chichiri-Sama]

I like the small amount of monsters, but why tsuki? and the scarabs? maybe a dekochi or dark mimic

 

[Judicator]

Because pure draw stinks, the best way to go imo though is spatial collpase trio lock, then you just have to worry about tribute mons (namely mobius).

 

[ygocollectorx]

this is my new deck edit

total:40

monsters:16
1 Left Leg of the Forbidden One
1 Right Leg of the Forbidden One
1 Left Arm of the Forbidden One
1 Right Arm of the Forbidden One
1 Exodia the Forbidden One
1 Sangan
1 Skelengel
1 Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive
3 Mystic Tomato
3 Emissary of the Afterlife
2 Magician of Faith

spells:12
2 Upstart Goblin
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Level Limit - Area B
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Heavy Storm
1 Pot of Avarice
1 Stumbling
1 Reload
1 Premature Burial
1 Graceful Charity
1 Dark Factory of Mass Production

traps:12
3 Jar of Greed
3 Waboku
2 Raigeki Break
1 Negate Attack
1 Backup Soldier
1 Gravity Bind
1 Call of the Haunted

 

[XIII]

well, i dunno about the emissaries. they seem kind of situational, and opponents wont attack it when you're locking them down. otherwise, they'd NoC it and render it useless. Jar of Greed can come down to 2 copies, as can Waboku. add a Backup Soldier and Curse of Royal, take out Lightning Vortex. since you have all that defense against monsters, i dont see why you need it. take out Negate Attack, too. Upstart Goblin is crap, but if you wanna keep it, fine. throw in a Sangan for the tomatos to fetch. and btw, mobius is ever so rampant in the tourney scene, so i advise looking for some kind of defense against our lovable monarch.

 

[Judicator]

well, i dunno about the emissaries. they seem kind of situational, and opponents wont attack it when you're locking them down. otherwise, they'd NoC it and render it useless. Jar of Greed can come down to 2 copies, as can Waboku. add a Backup Soldier and Curse of Royal, take out Lightning Vortex. since you have all that defense against monsters, i dont see why you need it. take out Negate Attack, too. Upstart Goblin is crap, but if you wanna keep it, fine. throw in a Sangan for the tomatos to fetch. and btw, mobius is ever so rampant in the tourney scene, so i advise looking for some kind of defense against our lovable monarch.

Upstart is not crap, its a free cycler in this deck...

 

[XIII]

well, with the space you have from removing 2 upstarts can give you more draw opportunities, say a Reckless Greed or maybe even another dekoichi. what im saying is that there are more ways than one to draw a card, but i agree that upstart is a free draw, pretty much. its just i think its a little dangerous, seeing how demise is becoming more popular. LP disadvantage is just not worth it to me. and getting attacked by a giant, skeleton-like, behemoth isnt very exciting either.

and judicator's idea with spatial/ojama lock is a good one, provided you have some s/t defense. i like it.

 

[Judicator]

well, with the space you have from removing 2 upstarts can give you more draw opportunities, say a Reckless Greed or maybe even another dekoichi. what im saying is that there are more ways than one to draw a card, but i agree that upstart is a free draw, pretty much. its just i think its a little dangerous, seeing how demise is becoming more popular. LP disadvantage is just not worth it to me. and getting attacked by a giant, skeleton-like, behemoth isnt very exciting either.

and judicator's idea with spatial/ojama lock is a good one, provided you have some s/t defense. i like it.

LP disadvantage? what LP disadvantage? I rather +1000 to them so I can maybe Self Destruct later.

 

[english chef]

I came across a person at my local tourney playing Generation Shift in order to be able to activate his Emissary of the Afterlife, and search a replacement. It can also be used to kill your own Sangan.
Quite novel I thought!

 

[XIII]

LP disadvantage? what LP disadvantage? I rather +1000 to them so I can maybe Self Destruct later.

i dunno. making ANOTHER win condition? its just kinda... not there. besides, exodia likes to be alone. unless someone can actually build a deck with 2 win conditions. that'd be pretty cool.