Good story.... I'm actually waiting for the rest of it....
At first I was thinking "Didn't I see a movie like this... RoboCop", but then you Shifted the story by killing him and by introducing us to what seems to be two of the stories main characters....
Thank you, Da. I'm working on some more here in a few. This an old story I've not put to paper other then a few notes and pictures. This a great way for me to "just write it", as I tend to obsess over my writing style, writing and re-writing till I look up and realize the 2-year old staring at me from her entertainer didn't exist when I first started.
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